☆ DOWNTOWN ☆ the trio exploring the streets of Coruscant on a night out! (surely even the Resistance has some downtime when not on missions, right… and imagine experiencing the scale of this bustling city planet for the first time!!)
I was listening to the song Downtown a lot, which is ridiculous and catchy but also the chorus makes me want to dance down the streets of an intergalactic city too /o/ also just imagining the First Order trio running into them and doing the dance-off in the video haha
There were the parts where the Stormtrooper cadet Ray pushes Finn aside to run ahead, and where she’s said to be better than him in almost every way. Also his feelings are highly one-sided and we see little evidence that Ray has feelings for Finn or has even treated him nicely. You were probably not aware but these are all common tropes about Finn that fans of color have expressed dislike for.
I was also disturbed that Zeroes, who is a Black guy in Before the Awakening, was described as particularly brutal to the point of wasting ammunition on already-downed simulated opponents. Zeroes’ actual character in BtA is much more cerebral, an intelligence operative type who notices everything that goes on around him and never misses an advantage.
I do like the chilling premise that Stormtroopers were being made to kill their parents by proxy through training simulations, and while the relationship between FN-2119 “Ray” and the Rey that Finn eventually meets is not clear to me I’m guessing her father did something to get her away from the FO. It’s an interesting premise and I encourage you to develop it for sharing from your own account or at archives like AO3.
She- she’s literally restrained on a torture rack????? And your take away is “ah yes they want to be close to each other”?????
Way to take an entire post that far out of context.
By the way,
“In Kylo Ren’s voice there was unexpected gentleness. Not quite sympathy, but something less than the hostility with which he had confronted her in the forest. “You’re my guest.”
With an ease that was more frightening than any physical approach, he waved casually in her direction. A couple of clicks, and the restraints fell away from her arms.”
Yes, thank you for this “Tea” I’m SUPER glad that it’s romantic to be kidnapped as long as your attacker is nice to you.
I should have expected as much from someone who’s username is literally “Incest Reylo”
You CANT MAKE THIS SHIT UP
Also, that excerpt is from the novelization that is non-canonical because it literally diverts from movie canon but yeah. That’s TOTALLY a sign of Reylo.
Yes because that is closer than this
why would they be so close if they’re “just friends”?!?!??!?
If JJ had confirmed Finn as Force sensitive and sent him to
Ach-To along with Rey it would have made Rian’s need to sideline Finn
that much harder to follow through with. I’m not saying he wouldn’t have
found a way, I have no illusions at all about Rian Johnson on this
matter, but what I *said* was that JJ made it easy for him.
L.J.: Oh please. You said in your earlier ask (link), and I quote: “Because it’s what JJ, the man you all put
your faith in, set him up for. Look at the end of TFA, there’s nothing
else there for Finn.” You didn’t just say JJ made it easy for RJ to sideline Finn, you said it was what JJ set up. Maybe you didn’t phrase it the way you meant, but you can’t blame me for your bad wording. Besides, you’re confirming yet again in your new series of asks that Finn being sidelined is simply what JJ set him up for, so stop trying to run from that.
And what pray tell is the clear and obvious path forward for
Finn at the end of TFA? Rey is the obvious primary Jedi, she was always
meant as the primary Jedi. At best JJ meant for Finn to play second
fiddle to her. What would likely have happened if JJ had continued the
story? Rey would have been half trained or more at the beginning of VIII
if we have any kind of significant time skip, clearly again marking her
as the primary person to drive the Jedi part of the story forward.
L.J.: So you’re just going to uncritically follow fandom’s assumption that the Jedi is necessarily the main character? Because there’s no way JJ would twist the formula even a little in the THIRD trilogy of the series? It’s fine if you yourself lack imagination, but don’t assume your own narrow vision is the only possible way to proceed.
As for possible ways forward for Finn, oh idk, maybe the difficulty of adjusting to relative freedom and individuality after a lifetime of regimented existence? His process of physical recovery from injuries? Making an actual choice whether he’s going to join the Resistance? Conflict about killing Stormtroopers? Setting up a Stormtrooper rebellion, which RJ actually went as far as to set up before leaving on the cutting room floor? The arduous process of deprogramming? His possible Force sensitivity, how it might differ from traditional Jedi powers, and what that means for the lore?
Wow, it’s almost like there was a lot to do there and you’re the one insisting that being a Jedi is the only way for him to be relevant!
Any training of Finn at this point would definitely have left
him a secondary character in that story. And what would Finn have been
doing in the interim? The ending of TFA gives no clear answer to that.
It lands his unconscious ass with a bunch of people he has never joined
at all. He might have been willing to stand against Kylo for himself and
for Rey, but it never lets him make a decision to join fight against
the FO in a larger sense.
L.J.: You’re identifying a lot of interesting directions Finn’s story could have gone in a better Episode VIII. Kudos.
Even if JJ never intended for Finn to have the Force or become
part of the Jedi related plot then he could have had him awake at Rey’s
departure and made it clear that he was joining the Resistance. Even
such little a thing would have made Finn’s path ahead clearer. But JJ
couldn’t even be bothered with doing that little for Finn. That kind of
lack of concern for a character’s story highly indicates that said
character was never that important anyway to the overall story.
L.J.: Those would only be oversight and neglect if JJ could have expected that the person to come after him would ignore everything he did, and, according to Daisy, throw out most of the outlines JJ prepared for VIII and IX. You assume that JJ shouldn’t have trusted RJ and should have set more things in stone for Finn. In hindsight that would have been far better, but putting his faith in a director who shouldn’t have been trusted is not the same thing as not caring about Finn’s character.
This is why I called Finn A Leia. You need to learn some Star
Wars history. The first Star Wars movie was not at all advertised as
only Luke’s story and while with modern day glasses Leia’s role may look
insignificant, it was a leap for 1977. And it was advertised as Luke’s
and Leia’s story. The Farmboy and the Princess. Everyone expected Leia
to play as large or an even larger part in the next movie once it became
clear that a sequel was being made. Instead that was Han, Leia no
longer mattered
L.J.: So sexism is a potent force in media much like racism is. For that exact reason, I am in NO WAY guaranteeing that JJ will necessarily treat Finn right. I actually agreed with you on that conclusion, but the arguments you make in support of that point are so egregiously bad that you’re actually undermining yourself.
Maybe it would be more accurate to call Finn A Padmé. Padmé
drives the plot in TPM, Anakin being dragged behind in what feels like a
subplot. That changes in the next two movies with Padmé becoming an
entirely insignificant character, only there to get involved with
Anakin, have Luke and Leia, and then die.
Yes I’ve read your Finn and Rey are Padmé and Anakin reborn
metas, they do not fill me with confidence for IX. Padmé was always
secondary to Anakin no matter how much she drove the plot in TPM. In
fact, given the set up in the PT, Padmé is so much more clearly
Palpatine’s foil than any of the others, but the movie keeps emphasizing
Anakin’s relationship with Obi-Wan as being the counterpoint, Padmé is
now only there as angst potential for Anakin and broodmare.
The only difference is that we always knew that the PT was going
to be Anakin’s story, but still many fans were shocked at how
insignificant Padmé’s role and character became. And given how TFA ends
I fear that that is what JJ always intended for Finn, that this was why
he felt comfortable casting a Black man. KK would still have hated it
because having any character of color that central even for one movie
galls her so I don’t see it as inconsistent with her fighting John’s
casting.
L.J.: I think Padmé is a better comparison so far as TPM/TFA goes, but again–Padmé’s and Finn’s arcs were different in their respective first movies, though their interactions with Anakin/Rey have many similarities. Padmé was much more active in driving the plot than Anakin was and this holds true even in AotC, but she was not shown to be developing as a character and overcoming internal conflicts the way Finn was even in TLJ, clumsily as it was done.
For like the third time, I’m not saying Finn can’t still be sidelined, I’m saying there is nothing inevitable from Finn’s story in TFA or even TLJ that says he will be as distantly secondary/tertiary as Leia or Padmé. I’m saying it would be bad and inconsistent writing if it happens that way, not to mention a huge loss of potential.
And neither John, nor Daisy, nor it seems anyone but JJ and
possibly KK and the story group, knew or will ever know what JJ
intended. At this point I don’t think it was anything much for Finn. My
conclusion is that everyone hates Rian so much at this point they
completely forget how complicit JJ is in this, how much he set of for
the possibility of this happening. And look up his Sam concept, Finn is a
Han type character, roguish smuggler guy, before he becomes a
Stormtrooper.
L.J.: In a medium as collaborative as film people do talk, though, and that gives clues. The people who worked on TFA or the novelization with him, such as Alan, Daisy, and Simon, may not have read JJ’s mind or have gotten his full plans, but they do know the discussions they had at the time and had enough clues to suspect–and what’s more, publicly say–that JJ’s intentions were not fully followed through.
As for your point of all those people objecting to how things
were handled in TLJ, you might want to notice that their points of
objections concern the WHITE characters. Rey, Luke, Leia, these are the
ones whom they are incensed about. Not Finn. Mark being the only one who
stands out even a little by supporting John so openly, but even he
speaks far more about the white characters and their mistreatment than
Finn’s. In fact, I can’t recall him even mentioning Finn directly.
L.J.: Most of them were about the white characters, but Alan Dean Foster directly mentioned Finn as well (link). Yes, he did say Finn was very underdeveloped, but he also directly contradicts your point that Finn’s story had nowhere to go at the end of TFA. In fact, you contradict it yourself. Also my larger point is that RJ directly contradicted existing characters and the setup in TFA to the extent that people who worked with JJ voiced their disagreement, something that extends to Finn as well.
John Boyega himself talked about this underdevelopment and potential of Finn as a feature and not a bug, saying that he prefers characters who have room to develop. Since you know about the earlier concept of Sam, you also no doubt know that Sam was originally much more powered-up and single-handedly solves a lot of problems himself. While that may well have worked better with a Black character, I can see John’s point as well.
If Finn’s potential remains untapped in IX then yeah, fuck JJ and I’m fully prepared for that possibility myself. But no one, including you, can tell me that I and many others simply dreamed up his centrality or his potential in TFA.
Beyond that, Anon seems to forget that JJ wasn’t the only writer. Michael Arndt and Lawrence Kasdan were also writers, and unlike Johnson who claimed he had UNLIMITED POWER, JJ talked about in detail how many other chefs were in the kitchen and we don’t know how many things were changed in re shoots. I’m not going to pretend to have a crystal ball and know everything, but regardless of the lightsaber bait and switch elements that screamed re-shoot plot holes, Finn’s story still clearly left him as the male lead.
TFA ends more like The Empire Strikes with Rey leaving to train and Finn suffering with the events of the movie.
And what really bothers me about Anon is how they keep talking about SW history and comparing Finn to Leia. If anyone is the Leia, it’s Poe. Finn is closer to the young Obi-Wan role in the prequels mixed with the Han Solo in the originals. At worst Finn is the deuteragonist like Han Solo, at best he’s the co-protagonist like Obi-Wan.
I might not work for lucasfilm, but I understand story structure and what would make a compelling story.
Here’s a short list of where Finn’s story could go in IX.
Finn orchestrating a stormtrooper to not only save his old comrades, but provide an army that the Resistance desperately needs.
Finn finding out he has ties to the Mandalorians or just joining the Mandalorians and convincing them to help fight the FO because Mandalorians hate the Empire more than the Republic.
Finn trying to find HIS family.
Finn finding out he has family in the FO and wanting to save them.
Finn using his 20 years of knowledge of the FO to become one of the Resistances most valuable soldier.
Finn going off on his own to rally outer rim worlds to fight against the FO.
Finn training with Rey in the ways of the force to battle Kylo and the KOR.
If people don’t have they’re own imagination, they’re fine to listen to Reddit. If JJ just dubs Finn, yeah fuck him, and I’ll go to The Mandalorian with Jon Favreau, but let’s wait and see for fucks sake.
I don’t think Finn fans should put any trust in IX. It will
treat him better than TLJ but that’s only because TLJ buried the bar
under the ground. JJ was the one who pulled the rug and left him in the
dirt giving Rian the option to safely ignore him. JJ was the one who
forced Rey into Kylo’s path and made her his foil, so that Finn could be
sidelined when there was the natural choice. I don’t think we’ll see
Bendemtion, but Rey will be the one who shines in IX and Finn is
sidelined completely.
Why do I think this? Because it’s what JJ, the man you all put
your faith in, set him up for. Look at the end of TFA, there’s nothing
else there for Finn. his story has no clear progression but is left
hanging like some appendix they can deal with in whatever way, there is
no clear progression. Rey is set up on Kylo’s path and she’ll be the one
to ultimately take him down. Finn might get to be a bit of a hero in
the Resistance part but he’ll still be secondary to Rey.
JJ set up Finn to be A Leia in the ST. He’s plot relevant in the
first movie and drives it forward and then he’s dumped because the real
hero, Rey, has stepped up. So if you ask me Finn fans should get out
while they can and before it hurt to much. If they’re looking for
another major scifi franchise with a Black lead Discovery season 2 looks
promising after they showed the latest trailer and there’s a lot of
others out there. But don’t bother with Star Wars, it won’t treat Finn
well.
Finn being sidelined is a possibility every fan should be prepared for, obviously. I don’t want to tell anyone to get their hopes up for JJ or IX, and I encourage people to disengage from SW if that’s what they need to do.
That said, I disagree with the arguments there. For one thing, I don’t think Rey was made to be Kylo’s foil–it’s clearly Finn who’s been set up as Kylo’s opposite in every way. Foil does not mean simply an enemy, it’s a specific literary term for a character that contrasts with another character. The foil relationship between Finn and Kylo continued even in TLJ. If Rey was set up to be anyone’s foil it was Luke in TLJ far more than Kylo.
For another, Finn’s story was not directionless at the end of TFA. You might as well say Luke’s story had nowhere to go at the end of ANH because his arc was complete. Comparing him to Leia is plain inaccurate when Leia did not have a protagonist’s arc or hero’s journey in ANH like Finn had in TFA. Luke had the hero’s journey in ANH, and Leia was in charge of his call to action. It wasn’t a case of Leia stepping aside for Luke, it was Luke’s story from the start that Leia had a role in.
It’s also disingenuous to validate RJ’s writing choices as flowing organically from JJ’s when multiple people involved with TFA and the franchise–Mark Hamill, Alan Dean Foster, John Williams, and Simon Pegg just off the top of my head–have publicly voiced doubts and disagreements with different aspects of what RJ did.
As a black fan myself, I also disagree.
Saying Finn’s storyline could go nowhere after TFA, is like saying Rey’s storyline could go nowhere after meeting look. A lack of imagination is all to blame for Finn’s role in TLJ and certain fans not caring about a character who doesn’t look the way Hollywood has taught them to care about. I’m not going to just re-write what @lj-writes just said, but I can think of a million of ways Finn’s story could have gone after TFA, hell I can still think of ways his story could go after TLJ.
The fact is, some people have no imagination on what to do. Johnson being one of them.
I know I haven’t talked about TLJ much recently – because I’ve kind of lost interest in Star Wars a little bit tbh – but I’m stillmad about how Rian handled Finn’s back injury.
Rian literally went from one extreme to the other in regards to how his injury from Kylo was handled. Rian initially wanted Finn to stay in a coma for the entire movie. All of it. The whole film. If that had happened Finn would have gotten virtually no screen time, no development, no chance to help with anything at all, no chance to shine. Which I think is what Rian was going for because Finn did get much less screen time and development anyway. He wanted Finn in a coma because he didn’t want to deal with Finn and so he could focus on other characters *cough*Kylo Ren*cough*
Rian only changed that plan because he was forced to. I have no doubt that he would have kept Finn in a coma if he could’ve gotten away with it.
So instead of Finn’s back injury causing him to be comatose, how was the injury handled? It wasn’t. At all.
There was no mention of it what so ever after the whole “Finn naked leaking bag” scene, which was just down right awful. You mean to tell me not one single person stopped to help Finn when he woke up? No one helped him until Poe and BB8 noticed? And the scene is shot in a way that makes it seem like Finn is incompetent about the bacta suit leaking. You mean to tell me Finn himself couldn’t change out of the suit and put on clothes?
He was seriously injured and the scene makes fun of him for being injured. Why did Rian feel the need to make Finn look incompetent? Finn is not incompetent. There was no reason to make him walk around in a leaking bacta suit other than to make a joke, which is super shitty because he could have died from that lightsaber wound.
What makes it even worse than it already is is the amount of time and attention given to Kylo’s wound. A wound that was much less severe. Finn’s back was cut open:
Kylo got a cut down his face:
What time was given to show Finn’s recovery? Nothing but a humiliating joke. What time was given to show Kylo’s recovery? A whole scene of him getting stitches and having Conflicted Emotions.
I just hate how much more care, time, and attention was shown to the villain receiving treatment and healing over the hero receiving it. And that really shows where Rian’s priorities were.
I’m not entirely sure if RJ truly intended to keep Finn in a coma or if it was just a horrible joke on his part, but I do think it’s not unlikely that Finn maybe was in coma longer in some versions of the script and those rewrites that were apparently done to include Finn and Poe more resulted into him waking up directly. This however doesn’t change that Rian didn’t give a damn about Finn’s injury and forgot it as soon as he couldn’t make stupid jokes about it anymore.
Logically Finn and Kylo should’ve been shown recovering at the same time, in parallel scenes. This would’ve shown their status as opposites both narratively and when it comes to their roles in the film. But RJ didn’t take the hero seriously but related to the villain and it shows.
It is, if possible, even worse than OP stated. Finn woke up in a storeroom.
In the novelization this is what he sees on waking up:
[He was surrounded by white, but it wasn’t snow–it was the walls and ceiling of a room. He was lying on a gurney, with a transparent medical cocoon above his head. Around him were crates and equipment, scattered haphazardly.
And there was no sign of Rey.]
This is, horrifically enough, borne out by the movie if you look closely at the scene.
Just as described in the novelization, medical equipment and crates are scattered around the room and it really does have the look of a storeroom, not an orderly medbay.
This is confirmed again when Finn recalls his awakening:
[Finn realized he felt guilty. He’d known what the Resistance hadn’t: that the Supremacy was out there somewhere, lurking in the Unknown Regions of the galaxy. Just as he’d known about so many other things he’d seen in his years of First Order service.
He knew it was ridiculous to blame himself–when he’d arrived on D’Qar there’d been no time for a thorough debriefing. There’d barely been time for him to tell General Organa and her officers about Starkiller Base before he’d left with Han and Chewbacca aboard the Falcon. And afterward…well, there hadn’t been an afterward. He’d woken up in a bacta suit, stashed in a storeroom aboard a ship that was being hunted.]
(And yes, the novelization totally does heap undeserved guilt on Finn for not warning the Resistance about the Supremacy and everything else. It has him wondering uneasily in another passage whether he would have warned them even if he did have the chance because he was so preoccupied with Rey. But if I start thinking too much about that I’ll put my fist through the screen, so let’s get back to the subject at hand.)
The idea that the Resistance would put a gravely wounded man in a storage space, that RJ contrived it this way, makes me want to throw up. Are you seriously telling me a ship as large as the Raddus didn’t have a medbay, including a secluded room for intensive care if one was needed? Yes, the evacuation was very rushed. That doesn’t mean Finn couldn’t be put in medbay, especially when he was already placed with the medical equipment necessary for him. If there was some manufactured reason we were never given why he couldn’t be put in medbay, at the very least a medic could be put on duty to watch him the… storeroom (barf).
This is just one of many reasonsTLJdoesn’t isn’t just bad but actively malicious, with the transparent intention to downplay Finn’s injury to a fucking unfunny joke. I hate, hate, hate this piece of shit and I wish nothing but bad things for RJ in life.